yet [cue for newness] bravery, constancy, and resolution [reverse of submission]. It is common for teachers to lament that students are can not write despite having done quite well within the PMR English exam for 15-year-olds. If you say because again and again, the one thing your reader will likely be alert to is because - it is going to stifle your argument which is towards the top of the list of items you should avoid with your academic work.